November 29th, 2020 
My professor gave me feedback that my literature review paper was very biased and lacked objectivity.
This is what she said “It is strongly written, although there is a bit of a bias tone to it since there is no dissenting viewpoint provided or alternative.”
“This is a really good start, but still needs some work. Make sure your language shows no bias about the program, but only offers it as a possible solution that you are going to test for intervention to a problem. If you make it sound like this is already proven, there is no need to do any further research. Please see the comments I put on your paper, and let me know if you have questions.”
Without changing the content/citations/essence/formatting of the paper, please re-write the portions that are biased towards Reading Racetrack as an intervention measure to improve sight-word recognition.
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