October 14th, 2020 
– first star with a brief introduction from general to specific, for the thesis statement answer yes and mention the two arguments for the two body paragraphs.
– second for each body paragraph after the topic sentence mention the paraphrased sentence from one source for each body paragraph and then use an interpretive move (for example: this means or any other). and please include a concluding sentence that sums up each paragraph.
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