December 11th, 2020 
Focus Question: do the colonist have legitimate, justifiable reasons for wanting to separate from Britain and form their own country?
This essay consist of 4 paragraph: the intro, the 2 body paragraphs with each paragraph having the claim evidence and reasoning, and the conclusion.
The focus question is asking if it is legit or not . For this essay say yes the colonist have legitimate,justifiable reasons for wanting to separate from Britain and form their own country
This essay is a CERER which is the first body paragraph with Claim evidence reasoning and the second paragraph with claim evidence reasoning
Please click the links below and watch the videos for more detailed instructions
The link below is the RUBRIC.Go for the 4
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1U8p2oDz09Ag07jZmf_TI8daU0sXUrvClKdT7XgGFY9o/edit
Additional Material listed below with the Links
– Below i attached a link to a PowerPoint on the ROAD TO INDEPENDENCE that shows explains what was going on in order.
https://docs.google.com/file/d/1jBrjvmInF5phZIGsI_riodtm_BuHfNR3/edit?usp=docslist_api&filetype=mspresentation
– I will provide the reading documents A B & C for you to read in order to answer the focus question in an essay format .I have attached the link below to the documents:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0By1r-Ypp-FYvbEFUMWozME1seGM/view?usp=drivesdk
– Link to Document D:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fBHP_D4nUv81TsSp55u-et56nsFns-Jf4YMW-Z0OpPk/edit
The O in the HIPPO answers if each document is justifiable or not.Below i have attached the link to each Documents HIPPO.
– HIPPO for Document A :
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1B33eRqS1WfV6bP4Jyzl-n7pNrc1iu6uMDWAa-oCu1fM/edit
– HIPPO for Document B:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1y7qAwmZS1tsSndghV3Xiw-_v2f6TyR0euNrvTfrSsvM/edit
– HIPPO for Document C:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f-NnND3_6Mipz_HnrhqELcrtvpPzLUTK-1hbsnKaqvM/edit
– HIPPO for Document D:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oIsTzyXc0YJ_R7Ooh159HZ9TSarMDSMC6bxOaaj_nGw/edit
Additional Links for intro
Essay writing cheat sheet for Intro, body and conclusion paragraphs below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Wjt-6JE4oBdH8oSeKYkyQTUHV-9hG_b3Up0kyMG5YlE/edit
BRITISH BREAK INTRO AND THESIS :
Teachers video on how he wants the intro with the thesis. teaches how to organize your thoughts to develop historical context for an introductory paragraph and thesis statement.
Please watch the video below on the intro and thesis.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/19PJh0gLT9Sgpd2kPbfQy4QbPg3Nvm_lE/view?usp=drivesdk
The thesis will be the last sentence in the intro paragraph. Which will say if the colonist have justifiable reasons on wanting to separate.
Additional link for British break body paragraphs with evidence
Essay writing cheat sheet for Intro, body and conclusion paragraphs below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Wjt-6JE4oBdH8oSeKYkyQTUHV-9hG_b3Up0kyMG5YlE/edit
Video on how to do the body paragraph with evidence.Teaches how to organize your thoughts to develop body paragraphs.
Please click the link below to watch the video below for further instructions :
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1R9pAKt7wYlLoIw6-C233TYWZnCoZrlfd/view?usp=drivesdk
The PowerPoint is the first link i attached of the road to independence.
There needs to be 2 body paragraphs the first body paragraph will be the evidence from the documents with reasoning on why it is justified and the second paragraph will be the evidence from the Road to Independence powerpoint with reasoning on why it is justified .
Body Paragraph Guiding Questions that needs to be followed
Does your body paragraph include relevant evidence to the prompt?
Is the claim being argued in the thesis statement? Is this claim strong enough to support the position?
Does the paragraph include both evidence from the document and the PowerPoint?
Is there an explanation that explains how all of the evidence responds to the prompt?
Additional links for British break conclusion paragraph
Essay writing cheat sheet for Intro, body and conclusion paragraphs below:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Wjt-6JE4oBdH8oSeKYkyQTUHV-9hG_b3Up0kyMG5YlE/edit
Video on how to do the conclusion paragraph .Please watch the video below.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aBdTFojp9ev7_7o0z9BqhVVYVgpjDbUn/view?usp=drivesdk
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